A developmental edit is a deep, big-picture look at your manuscript, focusing on structure, pacing, character development, and overall flow.
It’s where the story comes into sharper focus. Where what’s working is strengthened, and what isn’t quite landing yet is thoughtfully reshaped. Whether you’re planning to self-publish or pursue traditional publishing, this stage helps you move forward with a manuscript that feels clear, cohesive, and fully realized. My approach is thoughtful and collaborative, with feedback tailored to your voice and vision, so you’re not just revising, you’re revising with intention.
What is Developmental Editing?
Developmental editing takes a close look at both the big picture and the scene-level details of your manuscript, identifying what’s working, what’s not quite landing yet, and where your story has the potential to go further.
I’ll highlight key strengths and areas for improvement, offering clear, in-line feedback to guide you through revision with intention and confidence.
An Intesive Deep Dive Into Your Story!
Developmental Editing
Includes:
Two full reads of your manuscript
Editorial Report focusing on the most impactful suggestions
Two 60-minute calls to discuss your manuscript
30 days of unlimited email support
PRICE: $0.027 per word
The Editing Process
01.
A First Look
I start with a sample edit (up to 1,000 words) to get a feel for your voice, and to make sure we’re the right fit for each other.
02.
Let’s Talk It Through
We connect to talk through your sample edit, your goals, and what your manuscript needs next. You’ll receive a custom proposal with clear next steps.
03.
The Deep Work
This is where I step into your manuscript. Reading closely, editing thoughtfully, and leaving detailed, actionable feedback along the way.
04.
Delivery Day!
You receive your edited manuscript along with my notes, and we reconnect for a post-edit conversation to talk through revisions and next steps.
Ready to work together?
Have a question or just want to say hello? The best way to reach me is by either filling out the form below or sending an e-mail to danielle@daniellewraith.com. If you have filled out the form and haven’t heard from me in a few days, please email me directly.
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Working with Danielle gave me the kind of clarity every writer hopes for. Her feedback was both encouraging and incredibly actionable. I finally felt confident in my next steps and excited about my writing again.
— Amy J.
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